Monday, March 4, 2013

Mikes Fanfiction




They won’t see it coming.

 

This fanfic is set on Drew’s mission to make his father proud. This seems to be at the essence of most of the conflict between Christopher and JR Jnr. When Drew and Elena’s father died Bobby Ewing brought the land to make sure that Elena and her family would be ok. Drew believes that there was other motivation behind this. It has been claimed that his father’s land is worthless, Drew things that this is incorrect and that he can make the Ramos name proud again and prove everyone wrong.

It should be noted that I have changed the characters opinions and altered their personalities slightly for the purpose of this fan fic.

 

Everything was getting back to normal at South fork, the sun had just peaked above the horizon and the Carmen was getting the house ready for the day ahead. JR had stopped being all nice and polite and scammed Bobby into deleting harmful evidence against him and John Ross was claiming that nothing ever went his way. Christopher was finally making things right with Elena and Bobby could now focus on a plan to secure the future of Ewing energies through the methane project. All too manageable…

 

He came over the hill, “there it is” he said to himself. Drew had been away for so long and yet the very sight of South fork infuriates him.  

 

He continued to drive up the long luxurious driveway, passing by some many of his fellow countrymen forced into working for Bobby for a pittance of the productivity they produced. He always felt that there were two types of people around this place, nothing had changed. As he was getting out of his car he heard “Drew! Bliley didn’t thing I would see your mucky face around here. Well, last time I saw you, you were being brought home by the sheriff for... what was it Drew?” John Ross smirked.

 

Drew’s blood boiled, no one ever believed him here, but he had to play this down. John Ross was important to his plan. “I’ve told you before John Ross, I never did that!”

 

“ Com on, padre, we all know you did, that’s why you left here with your tale between your legs”

 

“John Ross, I’m a changed man, anything I did before is in the past I want to make the Ramos name proud. Where is my sister?”

 

“In the kitchen, your sweet old mamma is making everyone breakfast, she good like that”

 

Drew knew that John Ross was just stirring for stirrings sake; he left him with a stupid smile across his face and went towards the house.

 

Just remember the plan, he thought to himself. They can’t see it coming; then truth and justice will prevail.

 

He stepped inside, “Drew…” Bobby was standing there like he had just seen a ghost.

 

“Hi Bobby, it’s nice to see you too”

 

“Son, aren’t you meant to be with your unit, in the Atlantic? “

 

Drew had deceived them all, letting them all think that he had joined the US Navy when really he had been training with a cartel in the Venezuelan Rainforest as an explosives expert.  

 

“No sir, we never got deployed, so I decided to come back to Dallas for a while”

“OH, well it’s great to have you back son, come on your momma is cooking breakfast. She will be so happy to see you. We are all proud of what your been doing”

Drew let the faintest of smiles smirk across his face.

“HIJO!” all of a sudden Drew could feel love wrapped around him, his mother was gripping him tight with her warm loving arms. For a few seconds he felt completely relaxed.

“O, my darling son, how good it is to see your beautiful face again”

“Hi mum, I missed you too”

His sister Elena was sitting right across the room with the most stunned look on his face.

“Your back… but...”

“Yes sis, we never got deployed and so I’m back now”

You could tell that Elena was semi suspicious; the trust that was broken had not fully healed.  Although she still went over and hugged him.

“Guys, if you don’t mind I will go settle in, it’s been a long drive and I’m very tired.”

Drew then noticed that John Ross had been standing at the archway observing the whole conversation.

“Hey Padre, I know you used to live in that room upstairs... well it’s now mine. So you will have to stay out in the apartments down the other end of the farm. That all right with yawl?”

“Of course” Drew knew that anything at Southfork was considered luxury to most people.

 
As he was walking out with John Ross, they bumped into Christopher. Nothing had changed Christopher and John Ross immediately got into a fight about the most insufficient thing. The mistrust in this family disgusted Drew; he planned to use it to his advantage. Once he got to the room he thanked John Ross and proceeded to unpack his things.

A knocked a few hours later startled him, it was Christopher... “So how long are you back for?”

“Evening Chris, nice to see you”

“Cut the crap with me Drew, you always do this, you pop in like everything is just fine and then you are gone within days! I want to know how long is going to be this time!?”

“Christopher, I’m back… can’t you just be happy with that?”

“No Drew because Elena can’t stand this, if you cared you would keep in touch, but you don’t!”

“Christopher you just leave me and my sister’s relationship to me, but hey there is something I want to talk to you about”

“Just the same old Drew eh” Christopher stormed off mumbling under his breath.

Drew would have to work things out with one of them. Both of the two Ewing brothers were hotheads. Although Christopher represents the cleaner side of Ewing energies he was still as selfish as John Ross, but this could wait until tomorrow.

Drew made his bed and set his alarm, tomorrow was going to be a very busy day indeed.

In the middle of the night he heard a tap on the door. He thought he must be dreaming, but yet the tapping got slightly louder. He could see a shadow behind the door, but it looked small enough to be a child.

As he walked up, he was weary of the pranks that he used to play around here when he was younger.

He swung open the door to frighten any would be prankster…

“Mom, what are you doing here?” Drew’s mum was looking at him with a cold stare.

“Son, I know why you are here and I want to help”

 

Draft

6 comments:

  1. Can't wait to see what you do with this idea!

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  2. i still waiting ad keen to read you fanfic Mike!

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  3. Hi Mike enjoyed what you have so far, nice stuff dude it was easy to read and flow was great before I knew it I was at the end ... will there be more.. keen to see Drew and Bobby continue the dialog a bit more. Also I noticed in the first paragraph these a bit ..the (Drews mum) was... is that meant to be like that? thanks again for the read.

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  4. Thanks Nic, trying to find out here name, and yeah still in the draft stage so final product will look a bit neater :)

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  5. Fan fic is now done, will just add some more pictures, Will make some more comments on everyone elses tomorrow and throughout the week.

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  6. Hi Mike ! I like your story. When I read to the end, I was surprise how easy it was to read and Oh! my God! the end already…. keen to read it more.

    Oh! just a little confused up on the information you provide "When Drew and Elena’s father died Bobby Ewing brought the land to make sure that Elena and her family would be ok" is Drew dead?

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